I've decided to not post the full COTA article

"Bricks" (bricks) 10/13/2014 at 06:11 • Filed to: None

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I realized that nobody would want to read through all the fluff that went into the original article (It was 8 paragraphs long), So I'm going to cut it down to about a paragraph and then post it here. also there will be no pictures because I found out that my camera was in portrait mode when I took the few pictures for the article. I'll try to hammer out something by tomorrow.

Denver Is Stuck In The 90s > Bricks 10/13/2014 at 06:22

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don't cut it down to only a paragraph, but cutting it down to 3 or 4 paragraphs would be good. You're right we don't wanna read 8 paragraphs, but going from 8 to 1 makes me wonder what I'm missing

Bricks > Denver Is Stuck In The 90s 10/13/2014 at 06:24

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I'm cutting parts about getting to the track and trudging around in the rain, so it'll be all car/race/hanging out with stef stuff, you won't be missing much.

Denver Is Stuck In The 90s > Bricks 10/13/2014 at 06:28

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it's still part of the story. Think of it this way: to make it readable treat it like a college paper with very specific requirements. Can be no more than 4 paragraphs long, the paragraphs can't be more than 6 sentences long, and if you were to type it up (12pt font, double spaced) it wouldn't print out to more than a page

Bricks > Denver Is Stuck In The 90s 10/13/2014 at 06:35

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I edited my previous comment to better reflect what I was trying to say. This will probably be for oppo only too, due to the lack of interest from other parties I wanted to publish to.

XJDano > Bricks 10/13/2014 at 06:48

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I'd suggest posting the full thing on your blog, then if you want to cut it down, post that to oppo and link the 8 paragraph story in the post.

That Bastard Kurtis - An Attempt to Standardize My Username Across Platforms > Bricks 10/13/2014 at 07:34

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The Internet: 8 paragraphs? Pffft, fuck that.

I'd read the whole thing...8 paragraphs isn't exactly the newest George RR Martin book, kids.

Bricks > That Bastard Kurtis - An Attempt to Standardize My Username Across Platforms 10/13/2014 at 09:19

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The parts I'm cutting out are mainly filler. Hell, 4 of the 8 paragraphs aren't even race/car related.